Haiku composition: a depiction of my latest ordeal

November 19, 2007

Cold November winds

Beat violently in flight

The fool wanders bare
 

Night, dark and sublime

The fool exclaims in fell pride

Thunder cracks above

 

Walls wrought of iron

Crumble with one divine stroke

The fool awoke sick

 

Demons old and strong

Haunt the wicked and sick fool

Rain falls from the sky

 

The fool falls kneeling

Begging God for forgiveness

Light touches his cheek

 

Disease grips the fool

A fair punishment he thinks

Still he prays to God

 

The sun rises bright

Warmth caresses the ill fool

A flower bud blooms

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